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Will someone please give flight
To this broken dove
Show her happiness
tell her she is loved

Will someone please just help her
Lend her a gentle hand
Raise her in a way
That she can understand

Will someone please just notice
She's broken her small heart
And slowly, every second
her worlds falling apart

She pleads for your forgiveness
She begs you for your love
Please will someone notice
This hollow, dying dove...
not my best but eh who cares :/

90th POEM!!!! AWESOME!!!!
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nice
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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sendtoashwin Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I wonder what you'll choose as your career when you grow up, you have incredible writing skills.
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I want to be an author and a realistic animator!! :D
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sendtoashwin Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You'll be a great author, I'm sure...can't really say the same about animation :P no offence.
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
haha I'm bad at 2D animation but i'm a HECK of alot better at 3D animation X)
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sendtoashwin Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You've learned 3D animation :D
What do you use? 3ds Max, Maya? :)
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Used to use Maya :D It was so fun!!
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sendtoashwin Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Haha, I preferred 3ds Max.
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
whats that one?
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