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I got locked away today,
In a dark and lonely place.
Locked inside a small white room,
Where all light is erased.

This is the place the unwanted are sent,
When they give up reality.
When nobody wants us around anymore,
They send us here, you see?

There is a guard outside my door,
I hear keys locked on his hips.
I scream and yell to be set free,
But his concentration never slips.

I'm trapped here in this room,
Im trapped in this small box.
There are bars on one small window,
And the door has many locks.

All of my hope is lost,
All my dreams are fading.
I hear a noise outside;
The nurses are invading.

I hear patients screaming,
As they open up the doors.
I hear them fight and struggle.
I hear bangs along the floors.

Then I hear a "tick"
And a twist of a small key.
I sit alone in terror,
They're coming after me!

Two ladies walk right in,
They try to hold me down.
That is when one lady,
Stuck a hand right up my gown.

She stuck a needle in my rear,
Suddenly I felt real jaded.
I tried to fight some more,
But my vision has just faded.

When I awoke the next day,
I was tied down to my bed.
flashbacks of my life came back,
They were eating at my head.

I begin to scream and yell,
As I see things that aren't real.
I begin to choke and gag,
As cold hands I start to feel.

My memories are choking me,
They're raping me inside.
I cannot run away from them,
I can't even try to hide.

I begin to cry and weep,
As I take one final breath.
I smile oh so slightly,
As I think I've reached my death.

Yesterday I got locked away,
In a dark and lonely place.
Locked within a small white room,
Where all light is erased.

This is the place the unwanted are sent,
When they try to stop the pain.
No one wants us anymore-
Because we're mentally insane...
This is one of my favorite poems I wrote :3 although it does bring back horrid memories...mental hospitals don't always help, but friendship kindness and love help - thats all a person needs...

And a special thanks to :iconwelcometomymadhouse: for coming up with the last line! :squee: :happybounce:


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mcckaja Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You have talent
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :D
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mcckaja Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wlcomee ;)
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danodamano333 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014
...Know what this is like, too...
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so sorry :(
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SydneyCoalMinerGirl Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Professional Writer
I was locked in a mental hospital for over a month a few times, once for severe depression, the other time for polluting, these places are not fun. :(
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so sorry :(
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:iconsydneycoalminergirl:
SydneyCoalMinerGirl Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Professional Writer
So am I. not for myself, but for the others I saw there. There was a girl, only five years old, who was suicidal. There was a seven year old boy who'd been molested and was scarred for life. There was an old woman so far gone she couldn't speak anymore. So rather than using kindness and understanding, they were locked up, away from contact. Of course, this was back in 2002, hospitals may have changed since then but I avoid them at all costs.
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Gravuun-Feim Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
i know i don't know you and, you don't know me but... don't give up, i can relate to all the things you are going through. i know it's hard, i know that feeling of hitting the bottom more then you can remember and having to climb all the way up just to do simple things like getting out of bed or even eating. Iv'e been to mental hospitals and all that as well (they suck). 
    If you ever need someone to talk to, don't be afraid. You have more people that really, truly care then you might know. Lovely Shoujo (Heart for you) [V3]  
let your beautiful writing be your power and strength because it's truly amazing!!!  
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :tighthug: That made me feel a little better :3
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