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Tiny eyes glare directly at me,
I better hide so they can't see.
I start to shiver and start to shake,
My tiny heart begins to ache.
I stand in the hall as my head starts to spin,
Their tiny eyes see the pain I am in.
I freeze in a corner as they all glare,
I feel like im dying as they all stare.
They can see my terror, see my face;
They can even see my scared mind race.
I hate it when they look my way,
Why must I come here everyday?
They mock and tease the pain I'm in,
They laugh at the fear I have within.
The teachers then just make it worse,
Make me stand to say some verse.
They make me quote some famous book,
I shake and cry as people look.
And then they laugh as their eyes burn,
My bed at home I start to yearn.
The looks and glares drive me insane,
No one understands my pain!
This place is just not meant for me,
I can't stand places where they can see.
They can see my terror, see my face;
They can even see my scared mind race.
Their fingers point, they laugh and tease;
Make the staring stop, oh please!
I can't take the looks and glares no more,
It hurts me right down to my core!
I can not stand this eye filled place,
It makes me shiver, makes my mind race!
They can see me, with their evil eyes -
Wanting to see me let out cries.
This feeling of fear I cannot tame,
Scopophobia's the name;
It makes the eyes of others cruel;
It makes kids evil here at school.
Their watching me, they stare right through -
This pain I'm in, I wish they knew…
They can see my terror, see my face;
They can even see my scared mind race.
This fear of looks I can not tame,
Scopophobia's the name.
This was suggested by :iconyouremancupcake:

I hope you like it!!

I researched the fear and thought about how hard it must be to go to school when you're afraid of being looked at, so I tried to write it like someone with Scopophobia was at school. I worked hard on this and hope you all like it!!



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:icondalekcaanii:
DalekCaanII Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can feel the pain & fear leaking off of this.. beautifully done, as always! ^-^
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :tighthug:
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:icondalekcaanii:
DalekCaanII Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! :tighthug:
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D :huggle:
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DalekCaanII Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D :huggle: :dance:
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug: :squee:
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DalekCaanII Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug: :excited:
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YoureManCupCake Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
You did a perfect job, you worded it just as I feel it. There are honestly no words, for how well you did this, and how good it's made me feel. Oh, and happy 4th to you too.
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Im so glad you liked it! :D
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