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Suicide, the word rings in my ear;

I get out a knife, and I don't show fear.

I write down such, a long pretty letter....

Knowing my life, can not get better....

I know if I stay, the pain wont go away

I lose more hope, every single day.

I sit in my room, tears in my eyes

Remembering all, those horrid lies.

I see my depression, is going to win.

I start to cut open, my broken skin.

Blood oozed from, my fragile wrist.

Soon, so soon, I wont exist.

I cut open the other, blood rushes out.

Yet I don't yell, and I don't shout....

Now comes, the biggest test,

Building the courage, to stab through my chest.

I hesitate a bit, my heart screams silently,

Then I stabbed myself, so violently.

My blood gushed from my body, onto my bed.

I did it, I did it, i'm finally dead.

Will anyone notice, that i'm not here?

Will anyone even, cry just one tear?

I can only assume, they wont see....

That they will never again see me....
Wow....i think i'm depressed :cries:

NOT going to commit suicide....it's just a poem....

NO BAD COMMENTS PLEASE!!!
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:iconcrumbledwings:
CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
beautiful poem with a flowing rhythmic rhyme scheme, i absolutely love it
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you want to talk about it
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:iconxxwitherxx:
xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
idk....
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SterbenEdelweiss Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
If you ever want/need someone to talk to, feel free to send me a note okay? :hug:
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ok i guess :tighthug:
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Watchamillion Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
Awesome! This is absolutely amazing! Beautifully written, such a nice flow! Just wow! Great Job! Keep up the good work!
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, and thanks for the fav too
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:iconwatchamillion:
Watchamillion Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
you're welcome :)
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Midna1267 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
Awwwww :,(
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