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Suicide, the word rings in my ear;

I get out a knife, and I don't show fear.

I write down such, a long pretty letter....

Knowing my life, can not get better....

I know if I stay, the pain wont go away

I lose more hope, every single day.

I sit in my room, tears in my eyes

Remembering all, those horrid lies.

I see my depression, is going to win.

I start to cut open, my broken skin.

Blood oozed from, my fragile wrist.

Soon, so soon, I wont exist.

I cut open the other, blood rushes out.

Yet I don't yell, and I don't shout....

Now comes, the biggest test,

Building the courage, to stab through my chest.

I hesitate a bit, my heart screams silently,

Then I stabbed myself, so violently.

My blood gushed from my body, onto my bed.

I did it, I did it, i'm finally dead.

Will anyone notice, that i'm not here?

Will anyone even, cry just one tear?

I can only assume, they wont see....

That they will never again see me....
Wow....i think i'm depressed :cries:

NOT going to commit suicide....it's just a poem....

NO BAD COMMENTS PLEASE!!!
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
beautiful poem with a flowing rhythmic rhyme scheme, i absolutely love it
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you want to talk about it
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
idk....
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SterbenEdelweiss Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
If you ever want/need someone to talk to, feel free to send me a note okay? :hug:
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ok i guess :tighthug:
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:iconwatchamillion:
Watchamillion Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
Awesome! This is absolutely amazing! Beautifully written, such a nice flow! Just wow! Great Job! Keep up the good work!
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, and thanks for the fav too
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Watchamillion Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
you're welcome :)
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Midna1267 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
Awwwww :,(
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yeah...
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Midna1267 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
It's sad but I like it it's well written
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:iconxxwitherxx:
xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks
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Midna1267 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
Welcomes
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:iconeljolly:
ELJolly Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
Absolubely BEAUTIFUL! Its full of feeling, full of pain and saddness, still, Beautiful! thank you for sharing this poem! :)
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :) means alot
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squeakmaster312 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
This poem is amazing! It's really sad! But it's amazing!
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks
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:iconzanzorxl:
ZanzorXL Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
Wow, this is amazing, yet so sad!
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:iconxxwitherxx:
xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks
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MetalAndManga Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
If I was to scream these to a song and gave credit to you, would you be okay with it?
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:iconxxwitherxx:
xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
what do you mean, 'scream these'?
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:iconmetalandmanga:
MetalAndManga Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Essentialy I'm a lead screamer for a metal band.
And would love to try to cover these words :3
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:iconxxwitherxx:
xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ok :D just credit me, you gonna record it? cause i'd like to see :)
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MetalAndManga Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I will once i get my equipment back.
BUT THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!
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:iconxxwitherxx:
xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ok :) and np :)
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Katelynn425 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
I really like this poem, no im not emo or anything, but silent applause to you! I enjoyed it :)
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you
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Rukonex Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful words. Dark, but beautiful. It seems that darkness holds more beauty than the light, because you can't see in the dark, and if you can't see... Then you have to imagine.

I love this.
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks
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