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I’m hollow, I’m broken
I’m bleeding, I’m dead.
My mind keeps on spinning
Something’s wrong with my head

Insanity maybe? Or maybe it’s more
I’m hurting, I’m dying
My heart’s become sore

I’m laughing, I’m pleading
I’m asking for help
I’m screaming, I’m yelling
I’m starting to yelp

Can you hear me? Am I here?
Am I still alive?
Am I scared? Am I in fear?
Will I somehow survive?

Is there something inside me?
Ripping me apart?
Is there something wrong?
Something wrong with my heart?

Is it beating? Is it even there?
Is my mind running off?
Do you even care?

Am I alone? Or can you see?
Can see my misery?

Why am I grinning,
When I am in pain?
Am I still me?
Am I still sane?

Do I know you? Do I not?
Who am I? Cause I forgot

Am I a loser? A nothing? Or even a zero?
Am I your friend? Your lover? Your hero?

Am I shadow? A figment? Or your imagination?
Am I the cause of all your frustration?

Do you hate me? Do you love me?
Do you know who I may be?
I’m confused, I am lost, I’m all alone
Don’t you see?

Is there something wrong with me?
Have I lost my mind?
Am I nice person? Pleasant? And kind?

Am I rude? A jerk? Or maybe a freak?
Am I a nerd? Invisible? Or even a geek?

Will I ever be okay?
Will I see another day?

If I die, would you be sad?
Or would maybe just be glad?

Would you beat me? Rape me?
Throw me to the floor?
Cut me? Stab me?
Hang me by a door?

If I stay alive, would you treat me this way?
Would you do these things, every single day?
Would you shoot me? Drug me? Try to make me dead?
Why am I all messed up in the head?

Am I noticed, was I ever free?
Who am I? Am I still me?
No, now I’m insanity!
errrr....idk
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Eraezr Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I wonder, what's the main theme of this poem? Is it insanity or questions to someone or..?
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Questions for ones self, the person in this poem feels like she's going insane and she is confused and no one can help answer her questions
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Eraezr Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah...searching for answers but doesn't know where to find them.
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yup
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Eraezr Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hard place to be.
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yeah it is
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Mistle11411 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Student General Artist
cool poem.
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :)
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Mistle11411 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Your welcome!
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NightsCreature Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can so relate to this. Awesome piece the flow was perfect. :D
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks you :D
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NightsCreature Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure ^^
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hnm114 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Amazing work as always hun. :)
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :)
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MaskedWannabee Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, awesome, love the poem, keep up the good work :)
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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Miss--Understood Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This was really good, the flow was so well that it kind of turned into a song in my head halfway through, this was excellent :)
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :)
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Miss--Understood Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome :D
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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DemolitionPrincess1 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really good;I like it. For some reason my mind also thought to make this into a song. I guess that's what happens when I like things.
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :)
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The-Scribbly-Fairy Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
:+fav: :love:
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The-Scribbly-Fairy Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student General Artist
:happybounce: :squee: :la:
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:happybounce: :iconthankyouplz:
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Anahata-Crow Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
As a girl with a N.O.S. psychotic disorder, I can totally relate to this...in fact, you described how I feel the majority of the time.
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i feel the same way sometimes
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nightangel9360 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Heheh, insanity is fun, isn't it?
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hehe YUPPER!!! and thanks for the fav! :D
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Ichigoisawsome Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this. It's like all the things I say in my mind that never get the chance to be heard. Honestly speaking I would read half of the sentence and already know what it said.

Anyway. I really liked it
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you liked it! :D and thanks for faving it :happybounce:
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Ichigoisawsome Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem ^^
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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Ichigoisawsome Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Ichigoisawsome Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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xXWitherXx Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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